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In my Hand.

In my hand I hold a rose,
and in my heart I cherish you.

You have never hurt my soul,
or been harming with your words.

You take me to another place,
with your eyes so trustworthy
I get lost in this beautiful dance,
You make me feel sexy with your romance.

I never thought love to be successful,
I guessed I failed at doubting this
as I open my arms and start to believe.


You have always been a classy gent,
in every spoken word.
Make each one so rich with love
like these thoughts have never been heard.

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Written July 14th, 2005

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  • Welcome-To-Hell
    February 3, 2007

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    This was a beautiful write very heartfelt and wonderfully penned I like the breaks alot adds a little something to it very well done best of luck to you in the contest


  • sanity
    July 15, 2005
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    This is very solemn.. very good but solemn.. sad.. It flows quite nicely too..............Thanks for sharing.......................hugs and Love LindaXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX