The Rain Clouds never leave
and The Sun never shines
Not for you
Not for me
at least one of our Pains has ended
Perchance one our fates is mended
I cried out in Fright, in Lonlieness as you left me to this world Of Masochists
I wonder Why I bother
Sometimes I think to Run upon my own sword would ease my pain
Perhaps i have not been Forgotten by the Morals of Society
Or even by you, Who I love with what is left of my tarnished and Tattered Soul
i have Forgotten Myself
The Rose Blossom after the rain's worst tide
a single snowflake in the presence of a place that would Surely Destroy us all
and I wish I could bring myself
To Throw my uselessness into the abyss
But tommorow is another Day
Another Tear drop
Another Prayer I should Have prayed...
And I promise not to Forget you
so You will help keep me from being
Forgotten
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IN Loving Memory of Albert Bruce "Scooter" Smith
November 28,1946 - December 17, 2002 9:00 am EST
A Father Like none other, a Man like no Man, For his Heart is now mine, and his Quests are not lost as they will Continue in Me. He will be missed But Allways Loved and never Forgotten
Written December 18th, 2002
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A very touching tribute to your dad. I'm glad you didn't give up. good luck in everything.
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excellent
Incredible...so sad..really powerful,sorry for your loss -
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sorry...this is a very good write. i feel your pain and am in tears after reading this.
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sorry for your loss. This is so powerful. though only cyber ,you have a family here that cares about you and how you feel! -
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Sorry for your loss.
*****hugs to you and your family**** -
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how sad, I am sorry for your loss
*hugs*
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