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A Time...

I wonder if anyone looks at me
I wonder if anyone hears me
I scream at the top of my loungs
But do i make a sound?

I wonder if anyone fells the same as me
I wonder if anyone goes through what i go through
I talk and talk
But is anyone listning?

A time in my life
when i need a mother and father
A time in my life
when i need friends....

A time in my life when i want to kill myself...
this is a horrible time.

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Written July 13th, 2005

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  • December 4, 2005
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    Hey Baker. Love the poem. you kno im here forever and for always. love ya

  • believer06
    November 1, 2005
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    Awesome

    this is a great poem...i feel this way at times but girl remember im always here!!!

  • Cutie wit the Butie
    July 22, 2005
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    great poem.I really liked it.I'm a friend of Kayla Reno. And I think that you shouldn't have messed up her profile...I mean what are you 2? Come on my sister who is 7 wouldn't ever do something like that to one of her friends. Well I really did like the poem. Great write.
    -Stephanie