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Beating Heart

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I look deep into your eyes
What is that sound I hear
It makes me smile
It's the beat of my heart

You hold me in your arms
What is that sound I hear
It makes me feel alive
It's the beat of my heart

You kiss me tenderly
What is that sound I hear
It makes me tremble
It's the beat of my heart

Your hands caress my body
What is that sound I hear
It's making me want more
It's the beat of my heart

Your kiss is full of passion
What is that sound I hear
It's makes me surrender
It's the beat of my heart

You please me all night
What is that sound I hear
It takes my breath away
It's the beat of my heart

You hold me in the morning
What is that sound I hear
It tells me that I love you
It's the beat of my heart



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Written July 13th, 2005

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  • Lady Mak
    December 11, 2007

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    This is such a romantic write

    I loved the romance in this write how wonderful, such a tastefully written passionate write "It's the beat of my heart" very well done superb!!


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 26, 2005
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    WONDERFUL

    Thank you shubs for the "heart" felt comment . It is always such a joy to read your comments and poems. God Bless you my friend.

  • shubs
    September 23, 2005
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    Cute

    Superb poem with a cute message and a spiritual massage to which the sound comes directly from the beat of my heart and love was never so well sounded off--Shubs

  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    July 14, 2005
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    awww.. sandy this piece is adorable! well done!
    Di
  • Praise his name
    July 14, 2005
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    Awwwwwww Sandy I love this. I love listening to the sound of the person you love more than anythings heart beating. Andy and I are going great. Im in the process of trying to figure out something. Anways I really love this poem. Its such a wonderful write. I love it. It makes me think of andy.
    God bless
    Mary
  • Linda Sue silver member
    July 14, 2005
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    Hi Sis! I like this. It would make a great song. The drums could make the sound of a heartbeat as a background to the music. It would be...like...way cool!

    Look deep into my eyes.
    [Thump, thump, thump]
    What is that sound I hear?
    {Thump, thump, thump]
    It makes me smile.
    [Thump,thump,thump]
    It's the beat of my heart.
    [Thump, thump, thump]

    It would be nice as a romantic, soft rock love song. You could ask Josh to write the music. I can see the royalties just rolling in....written by Grammy Collins!!! I guess I'm in a silly mood today. I'll IM you later. Great poem! Love, Linny

    Edited on Jul 14, 9:05 because ''.
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