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Addiction.

looking in the mirror
forgetting whats inside
she wants a different life
a new place to hide

shes lost again
its different this time
spiraling away
still fighting the decline

trying new things
just so she can feel
never hearing anyone
until all is too surreal

forgetting her life,
her goals all together
nothing else matters
except making it better

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Written July 13th, 2005

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  • July 14, 2005
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    Awesome. I think this is a really cool poem 'cause it sounds like you're getting things off yer chest and that's the best thing poetry can do for someone