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a toast

here's to ya
here's to ya
here's to ya again
i'm glad that i metchya or we wouldn't have been
but i'm glad that i metchya
and i betchya
that if i metchya again
i'm let you back in

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Written July 13th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • UnFoRgIvEnSINS
    September 1, 2005
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    are you talking to me or stac? anyways, yes this was dad's drinking song...and this contest helps me keep it alive..

  • Secret Sue
    August 25, 2005
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    ann...this was DADS drinking song
    xoxo
    sue


  • Sarah957
    July 30, 2005
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    You are a silly girl. Where do you get this stuff?


  • Taur-amandil silver member
    July 27, 2005
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    This was very well written! It has a wonderful flow, and its easy to picture people singing this. Nicely done! Good luck!


  • Roxy02
    July 23, 2005
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    I liked this! I can imagine it being sung in pubs on a very drunken night!


  • pattyann4500
    July 20, 2005
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    OH NO! A brother/sister feud. You guys must be drinking again! LOL

    Actually, this was quite cute. Too bad we can't quite put these to music. LOL Good luck to you. Hugs, Patricia


  • Stac
    July 15, 2005
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    well...i can say it's dumb becasue she's my sister and she knows what i'm talking about...so...yeah, inside thing i guess.
    STAC


  • July 14, 2005
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    Hey, this isn't stupid at all! It's a very well written drinking song, I can imagine singing it just now (but I wouldn't be due to my age Well done, you seem to have done exactly what the contest asked for.
    Becca


  • Stac
    July 14, 2005
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    what the hell is this? it's so stupid!
    STAC

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