You speak to me like i'm listening
but i'm not
Cuz everything i do you keep questioning
that just makes me hate you a lot
Saying your my friend
that you'll always be there
The way you act makes me regret the day we spent
I wish our friendship was just a dare
All the words you speak i hate
i guess to me there lies
I wanna move as far as i can from you, like to another state
So you'll feel bad and the tears flow from your eyes
Just get the fact that I HATE YOU
i never wanna see you again
Cuz of you lies i always knew
and they just drove me insane
Author notes
Um i think it says it all...
Written July 13th, 2005
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WOW! Thats rele good! i enjoyed it
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wow you rhyme well...be careful not to stress it tho...if you cant rhyme something without forcing it then dont. great write tho...i can tell you really hate this person
. great write...thx for the comment btw (yeah...i know it was over a month ago, but i wasnt here so what are ya gunna do, you know?). oh yeah..and the used is fuckin awesome
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You rhyme very well. Your poem flows and you make sense. All good qualities for a good poet.
I think you make good daughter material. LOL
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'wooooooooooooooooooooooooooot wooooooooooooooot'
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good job
is that about your best friend? thats good i really liked it my best friend slept with my boyfriend and made out with a boyfriend i had for two years i forgave her am I insane?
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this is really good,yeah they should make a hate category,but yeah definately can tell u really dislike this person,ive been there and know what thats all like.lol i was looking at the new by favorites and saw this name and was like...uh i dont remember that person lol and then i looked at your authors page and was like oohhhh lol.**Laura**
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this is deep i love it
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omg ur so evil
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dam I take it you hate this person lol, joke good write
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i love it..
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