I light my incense, and remember you,
and the day our love was through,
by the tensel, we argued,
the only reason just to feud,
I put my laptop on my table,
to write you a little fable,
now i try to remember, and revamp,
mem'ries when you matched my lava lamp,
with your face flushed from champagne,
as you took off my corset,
"So you can breathe." you told me,
You liar, seeing me free,
now i write our names in Sharpie,
and scribble 'til it bleeds,
while my background music's techno,
and my face, it's so aglow,
you see, your nicknames buddha,
with all yoour long hair, HAHA
Author notes
Written July 13th, 2005
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This poem is unique. Good job making do with the ten words you had.
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Very good!Though you spelled tinsel wrong.Good luck with the contest!
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This was interesting. I like the rhyming and the ending was not expected, which I liked.
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