Our good times were the worst
The time spent together feels like nothing more than a curse
No point in holding on to what was once and never again
We have not spoken
Still don't know the words to say
Letting go of a love that is no longer here
Love has now become my deepest fear
Those words were all it took
Feelings that had once disappeared
Overwhelmed me but just as quickly vanished into thin air
My only words to you are...
You shouldn't have spoke the silence would have been better
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Written July 13th, 2005
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I caught one grammar mistake. Umm, the poem wasn't up to what I wanted for the contest (but it wasn't bad either). You may want to use a broader vocab. Hmmm, would it be better if we lived in silence? I don't know, silence (all the time) seems to be worse as fighting. Maybe even worse. I don't know. But then, silence is a beautiful thing in some instances. Well, I don't know what to say about silence. Nice write, goodluck, and keep writing...
~^~Tiya~^~
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thanks i feel like that now i just got done talking to my ex and i am so confused right now i dont know what to do
Edited on Jul 15, 2:57 p.m. because ''. -
love this poem i felt like this at one point1
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