The moment I wake I hear your voice,
You say those words I used to dread.
Now I'm blessed for once instead of the usual scorn,
There's no longer a darkness at the end of the hall.
There's no longer a downfall of tears every day and night.
I have found someone who is perfect in most ways wanted.
I can't complain with the few flaws for I have many.
The simplest things you do make me overjoyed.
The kisses you give make me jitter.
The touch of your soft hands make me hallucinate.
The feel of you arms around me make me feel secure.
The way you do everything is so cute and unique.
Everyday this affection grows more intense.
The lust becomes more desired.
The love defeats all purpose of life.
The hate has never stepped in an unwelcome home.A day with you has been like a year in paradise.
Then as I lay in beside your exhilarating body,
Fall into a abysmal mesmerizing sleep.
I wake to find that it was all just a fantasy.
I'm still here in this misery-filled world.
I'm still surrounded by hatred and pain.
Love isn't real... It's just a fake fairy tale.
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This may not be true for some people, but it is for me....
Written July 13th, 2005
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Ausgezeischnet!
Love isn't a fairytale anymore! hee hee. I enjoyed this poem, because I can understand where you're coming from. That's why I've been in the dark for so long. But of course, I found my Dark angel
Awesome poem babe. Love Ya.
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I agree with you.. it is just a fake fairy tale.. I like the way you put this... as if it was really happening, but then you ended it as just a fake fairy tale... interesting piece.
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good work. the fact that this is free poetry,not restrained with rhyme or meter makes it sound very natural and straight from the heart. but try to make the lines a little shorter. you can achieve expressive poetry through shorter lines. but all in all it was good work...regards shom
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wow....this is very good i really liked it an i know how you feel and everyone tells me what ppl r tellin you "you'll find "love" sumday" but it seems that sumday never comes anyway great poem really enjoyed reading it keepp up the good work
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Brandie -
True love is out there,i thought i had it but in order to have true love the other has to love you back perfectly.But friendship love is always real,and baby love Everyone better love my baby.Anyway this is good and i hope you aren't all unhappy and what not that would make me sad and i would have to hurt you.hehe j/k. Love you sammy
-Ashley
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