Fed up with me
Fed up with you
I'm depressed
Your depressed
Let me give you a clue
I'm still human too
I know how it feels
So don't give me your speech
No one notices
No one cares
No one loves me
Well perhaps I do...
Am I insignificant?
Just another voice?
I'll miss you if you leave...
I'll cry true tears for your departure...
You want to make me suffer?
You want to see me scream?
As I hold you in my arms and wish it was a dream.
Don't make me live through this again.
I'm losing this fight yet I can't give up.
I'm the one who has to be strong,
And correct all the things that have gone wrong.
Give me a reason.
To hate you.
Then it might not hurt so bad.
Oh well you say.
Farewell I can't take life.
You lost the moment you gave up.
There is still hope...
I'm still here...
Please I beg of you just listen for once...
Hear these last desperate pleas.
No rhyme or rhythm could ever match my feelings...
Don't go...
My friend
My dear
My love...
Author notes
I want you all to listen... Anyone thinking of suicide... Anyone trying to supposrt a friend... This is my desperation... My last cry for hope...
Written July 13th, 2005
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No words can ever appreciate the real feelings of ones heart. I am at loss how to even appreciate something like this. I'll just say you've got it in you..
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this is my new favriot poem on this sight, u madeit very clear how u feel n i like that
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this is a great write you made your feelings very clear and the deaperation shows through...
this is a very deep poem well dun!
~*~Kate~*~ -
this is very well written with a lot of emotion. I am just a little confused as to whom you are addressing....is it addressing anyone in general who is contemplating suicide , or is it maybe you sort of talking to yourself as to the hope there still is ....one way or the other , it is definitely noteworthy for anyone to read. My father committed suicide , so I can speak from experience. Death is FOREVER , for the one who is dead ....and tragically also for the ones that are left behind
Reenie
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i usually contemplate suicide. this has helped me see some light for some while atleast. intense
god bless u -
awesome poem dude...loved it...great write
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wow...that was...amazing.
not only did it captivate beauty.
but also a very real emotion.
it was awesome, I loved it.
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