In the blink of an eye,
All you've wanted can be yours....
In that same blink,
It can all be taken away as well.......
Drowning in insanity, with burning passion,
I run.
I find solitude,
I enter my sanctuary in which I bleed.
I bleed for all who have left me here alone,
All who have left me here to die.
Those who once cared,
Bleed with me as I finally succeed in vengance.
Internally broken, crumpled and thrown away,
I wish to be nothing but hollow.
Emotionless, cold, unbreakable....
Yet I remain alone,
Condemned to darkness.
Bringing the worst of me out,
I cry until I have spared all but one tear.
That tear is savored,
As if my last breath....
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Time Well Wasted
Written July 13th, 2005
A contest entry
- Give me Hope by Shooting Star.
300 points, ended September 21, 2005, 15 entries
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i really enjoyed this.. i could feel your pain and emotions spilling from the page... i love the whole thing.. and really the first part.. the whole in the blink of an eye everything can be yours or vise versa in the same blink.. great wrtie.. good luck in my contest
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