You aren't wanted in my mind anymore.
Leave now,
I've shared too many tears with you.
You're a parallel universe
And you don't belong.
Not here in my mind.
An echo on my thoughts never leaving.
Never leaving my soul to find another one to haunt.
Wait,
You're my memory universe.
You burn alive in my soul,
His memory never fading.
The day we met,
The hours we spent to gether.
Nights spent playing basketball,
Lingering kisses, days fishing until dusk became of us.
Birthdays and Christmas,
I wish there were more to come.
I want this world to leave me alone.
Wait,
You're my memory universe.
Author notes
I wrote this when feeling down from a song by Nine inch nails called 'something i cant have'
Written July 12th, 2005
A contest entry
- Amaze Me by shastadaisey123.
500 points, ended July 13, 2005, 6 entries
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i dont put poems on here anymore. im too busy with my boyfriend(new one) and if i write a poem, we do a picture in photoshop with it on there.
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wow this was yet another good one bye u it was great i loved it tha flow was beautiful keep it up and sorry i havent been commenting on ur poems lately i have been extremely busy but anyways keep it up and will read more from u really soon
Tabby -
thanks. im glad someone feels the same way about me. even when im with my new bf kevin i find myself missing him =( when i drove by his house tonight i was laughing and giggling with my friends and kevin and i looked over at his house and just ignored it.... for once i was able to do that.
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I loved the first two lines, I relate to them so well, just how I feel about a partcular someone in my life... i relate so much to this poem, once again swept away by your talent... great write hun!
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thank you so much. and yes emotions can be quite a trip
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thanks ^^ for the past 5 months, someone has been living in a universe far away from me in my memory. and it sucks
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I always enjoy poetry that leaves my imagination open t soar freely and this is such a piece...you capture the essence of our roller coaster emotions..well done and thank you for entering the contest...
Freda
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memory universe.... an interesting concept. And a very nice poem, Crazy Dani. It's expressive of those feelings we get from time to time when we think we need or want someone and can't seem to make it happen.
good luck in the contest
Dee
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