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Wishes

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This "ladybird" is sweet thirteen
she's never ever been real mean
a gift I'd give to one so true,
but what to choose.. now I'm real blue
perhaps a leaf, or bug or fly?
I'll look go see, what I can spy
but happy words I'll say for you
like HAPPY BIRTHDAY!..( my how you grew).


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Happy Birthday .
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Written July 12th, 2005

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  • cutiepie gold member
    July 23, 2005
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    Thanks Sara for your kindness ..hope all is well in your world


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 23, 2005
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    Thank you Glad you enjoyed it


  • Sara Bellem
    July 21, 2005
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    Aw, this is so cute, I enjoyed reading this. As you could tell from my poem you read and commented upon, I'm having a hard time and this made me smile. Its truly refreshing to read a light-hearted piece when you're sad, happy, or any occasion! Thanks for your words, I appreciate them. Keep it up with the writing, I hope you won a trophy! ... Sara


  • powerslave
    July 14, 2005
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    That's a charming little birthday poem If it doesn't win you at least gold, then it'd just prove the whole world's gone wrong Well done


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 13, 2005
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    Thank you delighted that you enjoyed it


  • babyalah
    July 13, 2005
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    this is really cute, a nice poem for the birthday girl. well done and good luck


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 13, 2005
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    Thanks Jenna


  • jezz-aussi
    July 12, 2005
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    What a cute poem! I really enjoyed this. ^^

    Love and light,

    Jenna


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 12, 2005
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    Thank you Emily I am delighted that you enjoyed it


  • Lady Bird
    July 12, 2005
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    This is such a sweet poem...I really love this. Short and sweet and completely thoughtful...the rhyming is very good. I like the picture as well...thank you so much for your entry, and best of luck in my contest!

    -Emily


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 12, 2005
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    ..I do love doing these whimseys


  • wattle silver member
    July 12, 2005
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    Ms Cutie, clever cheery you. Thank you.

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