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Peace

Ever and forever,
as I rise for the Armageddon,
to surrender my soul... to peace.

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Written July 12th, 2005

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  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    April 15, 2008

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    This a very good piece, although I feel it would be better with a few more lines...but of course that's up to you....

    Thank's for entering my contest and good luck!


  • epitaph-macabre
    September 18, 2005
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    ooooo i like this ...makes me see natural disasters wipe-ing out the human race...all that would end in peace, well done.


  • Aurielle
    September 10, 2005
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    you shold add one more line and it will be perfect.


  • eternalpoet
    July 16, 2005
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    5 Stars *****

    hi mayank..
    first of all thank you very much for making me read this write.. i love such type of writes.. personally i have wrote few like this too.. and the feeling it gives inside a writer is definately... like.. soothing.. though the write is nowhere near the soothnesss ... nice write..

    hugs ya
    thanks for sharing

    gives choco (may be childish, but its a tradition )

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend ...... just keep it up...... your humble little friend............. .............. ........... ......... - vic ( who else ? )


  • Donjo1030
    July 16, 2005
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    nice

    Very short and direct piece. Nicely done with a strong message of how important is to find peace. BRAVO


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    July 16, 2005
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    A great work..

    If it relates with an Indian context..then the thought is chasing the peace of the soul... a permanent peace in which a soul is not forced to take re-birth on the earth..where one has to live with sufferings..this peace gives a permanent joy ....permanent life..under the own/special world of God..About pixiku..I would like to say that it is only a format nothing else..It is not as important as the the deepness of the subject is.If the subject is weak then any format of any language in any where in the world will not work..This work is really very deep and require very deep attention..Thank you for sharing it..prabhudayal khattar

  • Stella Shall
    July 16, 2005
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    this is very profound I like it alot good luck in this contest very appropriate for these times. All the best Stella.

  • Molly Densmore silver member
    July 16, 2005
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    Very nice and inspiriation fills within reading this. Great work on the style of poetry. I really liked it. Thank you for sharing.


  • DamnUnique
    July 15, 2005
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    though the thought was real nice but i didnt get something is this some new poem form?

  • p
    July 14, 2005
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    sweet write Mayank..good luck at the contest..hoping to see you around sometime..


  • SEA angel gold member
    July 12, 2005
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    Peace Brothers and Sisters

    This is an unusual take on peace and quite creative. I like the thought of surrendering my soul to peace. Let peace begin with you and now me too and...

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