Another sultry July evening arrives once again this night
Insects chirp in vain, as their harmony is unappreciated
I do not wish to be here, in this point of my existence
And I know a force unfathomable awaits my attention
His patience echoes from his throne beyond these enthralling stars
Yet here I sit unmoved and uncommunicative, though not with intent
I cry to be something outside of my own flesh
Now trapped inside it and freshly aware of my own imprisonment
I feel a new and profound desperation for a daily deliverance
From this wretched solitude that is my self
Heavenly Father, Creator, Protector...
Daddy...envelope me inside your vast arms
So that I may weep for the times I've been away from them
And have no other alternative than to be changed by them
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Written July 11th, 2005
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WOW! You seriously captured a lot of what I have been feeling and experiencing in my life lately. This was very deep. You are truly a great poet.
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Baby doll... This poem is great, so deep, intelligent, passiontae, real...
I love it, I love it. It's about time you got back on this site...
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Very good poem...I know the feeling. I really like this poem, and I am not just saying it. This touches a feeling that rises from time to time. Check out some of my poetry. I think you may enjoy it. If not, that is fine...I think I wll still keep tab on you though.
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This is a very touching write. I feel this way sometimes....God will always envelope us in His love.
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Wow, the many times I've said this same thing are countless. I enjoyed the read. I'm happy to be reminded.
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yay! we love God! lol. this was a great write and i loved the ending. it is very good and i loved it very much!
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