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If You Try

When people are deeply in love
They'd do everything together
They'd love until the end of time
How I wished you would with me
But some things aren't supposed to be
Including us
Your love, no matter how short
Made me live for a while
You carried me along on your wings of love
I could see the skies above
And how I want that feeling again
Knowing how I can never again, but
Might as well wish
Wishes do come true, if you try

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I love fluffy bunnies!
I really do by the way.
This is really kind of stupid, really... but uhhh... enjoy(?)
Written July 12th, 2005

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  • lost star
    July 12, 2005
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    thank you for entering and thank you for the comments on my poem... this is a little sad but often true poem, i like the way it flows and the rewuired line fits well with the poem. great write, keep up the hard work.

    xx lost star xx