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Temptation (Cinquain)

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Angels
Wrapped in beauty
Tasting forbidden fruits
Cast from lofty heights down to earth
Fallen



Author notes

Written for the contest 'ONE Day Contest --- Satin and Feathers' by Amunet Wolfbane
Did not win


Written July 12th, 2005

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  • Elrenia
    July 20, 2005
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    Thank you. There was a picture that inspired this, but as I am a free member, I cannot post it. And it looks like the contest link is gone. But, thank you for reading and commenting.

  • Ankita DG
    July 20, 2005
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    So short, and yet so beautiful and so very powerful!

    Great work! Keep writing!
    Ankita


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    July 12, 2005
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    Very short piece, but I will have to say it packs qutie the wallop of power and imagery behind it! Bravo! This is very impressive! Blessings, Gypsy