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Perpetuation

Sadness grips my desire,
Desire turns into hate,
Anger propels my pain,
My heart turns into stone,
Weighing me down,
Trying to forget you,
Trying to hate you,
I can't, though I'm trying so hard,
I hate not hating you,
And it pulls me under.

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Written July 12th, 2005

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  • sara20
    July 12, 2005
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    yeah i know what you mean. you wann hate him so but you're just not caplable beacuse your love is so big.really great poem it expresses alot.