Never have my words been so deep,
All my feelings I've seemed to keep.
Never did express how much you mean to me,
Always thought it was evident, so clearly.
Everything I needed to say.
My words have never been so true,
In wanting to be loved by you.
Constant taunt of feelings,
Lips always resealing.
Take back the words I had said,
Pretending that they were dead.
Act natural, as if nothing,
Still wishing to be your something.
Everything I needed to say.
I never wanted to hurt you,
Last thing ever I want to do.
Always tried to open up my mind,
Quickly a new topic you would find.
Never let go,
Oh no, no, no.
You left me somber and cold,
With many words left untold.
I just needed to say I love you
Never will my words ring anymore true.
Everything I needed to say.
Even if your so far away.
Author notes
Fucking sucks balls.
"Linty Golden Ducks of Doooom"
Number 10.
Written July 11th, 2005
A contest entry
- Calling all poets who think they got what it takes.. in other words...GET YOUR ARSE IN HERE. by FiveCard -Monty.
400 points, ended July 20, 2005, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This is so sweet! OMG, I love it! Great write, and congrats!!
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Aw..this is a really sweet poem..i loved it! Im in the mood for love poems..and i really enjoyed this one. I loved the emotion your brought into this piece..it shows it really came from your heart..and thats what makes good poetry!
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Oh wow Sun, this was really beautiful. Ah, words could not explain the beauty of this poem, this amazing work of art infront of my eyes. It was as if you took the words right from my soul itself. Wonderful wonderful poem. never could there be better, equal yes, but better- no
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nice poem d00d...love the feeling u put into it...keep writing!!!
-shayne aka that one guy -
thy words touch within those echoes where tears run silent... and grab a heart when one least expects it.
yes I clearly hear you!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill -
Wow, this is a very excellent poem, Very emotional and i absolutely loved some of the rhyming you had in it. Very beautiful piece almost lyrical.
Awesome job
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I love this!
OMG get out of meh head already..O.O 
all your poems that ive read so far have been amazing, and i could totaly relate to them.. and like the others..THIS ONE ROCKED! 
XD Perfect!
mucha luv,
CrY
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Sounds like someone is running away from the truth, ne? Well I hope it goes well for you. Yoko-chan
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Wow! This is one of the best writes I have read in a long time. I love it and can relate so deeply. Great write keep it up. Can't wait to read more.
Love Sandra
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~sigh~ 'k now... definitely 'been there' and all that jazz. Really does suck eggs! he he ^^-^^ We never learn, do we?
Seriously though, I think you displayed that closed mindset of, they should know already, that happens a lot and is a real relationship killer. The real irony here, is that you say that you were trying to be open about... yeah... ~raises an eyebrow~ you don't quite say.... Still holding back, are we? LOL -
This is a great piece i especially loved the stanza
Take back the words I had said,
Pretending that they were dead.
Act natural, as if nothing,
Still wishing to be your something.
Great work very heratfelt and emtion filled. -
i think so many people are feeling and thinking the same thing, with possibly the same regrets, and i can relate to this, except i did end up telling the man of my desire how i felt, and luckily he felt the same, this was too awesome for words, and i am so glad i clicked to read it, more people should. great job. _much love -jess
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I would say this is freaking great. Great job, and good luck in the contest. if this is something you think sucks, then what do you think is great? Athena
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:3 My sunshine... another romance over so soon!? *sniffles* Deep poem my sunshine... so deep that my shallow mind doesn't quite grasp the entire poem. XD Maybe because the music's distracting me?
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thats fucking awseome Thats what I wanted to say so much
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