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Broken Inside

Look into my looking glass
And tell me what you see
For your heart is just brass
As I dance around with glee

You are no one
All alone in this world
Soon you will be done
And I will have prevailed

I live to destroy you
You are my muse
And nothing will go askew
My offer you can't refuse

Break my looking glass
This will all end, I promise
So don't be afraid, alas
Just one swift kiss

Shattered mirrors cut deep
Or so in ones mind
So in the end weep
So at least you'll be blind....

Author notes

Sorry this was kinda long....huh? Hope you like it nonetheless!!!

*SMILE*

Does anyone know what its saying?
Written July 11th, 2005


1. How Long have you been on AP - Jan 16, 2005
2. username - SuicidalLover
3. Age - 19 (20 June 13)
4. How often are you on AP. - This last 3 months, everday.

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  • Blooming Poet
    May 11, 2008
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    http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2404559
    for the next round

  • Blooming Poet
    May 9, 2008

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    • SuicidalLover
      May 9, 2008
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      Thank you! So will you be sending out the link to the next round? Can't wait to see!


  • Blooming Poet
    May 2, 2008
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    This shows a lot of talent in your writing ability and that is what I am looking for, the potential to write amazing poetry. Congrats you have made past the first round.


  • warrior-eagle
    April 27, 2008

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    50/50 for following rules
    25/25 for overall poetic ability
    20/25 for Creativity in writing, pics or backgrounds added.


  • FallinTears
    October 30, 2005
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    This is a good poem... keep up the good work!!


  • X-xElectrax-X
    October 18, 2005
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    I like tis poem alot. Your poetry is awsome!
    Electra

  • BrokenFairy.
    October 6, 2005
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    beautiful/excellent

    oh my god...........this is beautiful, pure beauty and anger and talent and i love it.....it is so beautiful, never give up sweetie, it will all be okay.

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