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Three words, everyone should say each day

I Love You

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Three little words that could brighten up someones day, change a relationship into something more intimate. We should tell everyone we love them every day as we don't know whats going to happen. Sorry bout this entry, but I live in England and the London Bomb Blasts were horrible, and I would hate to lose someone I love without the chance of saying one last time 'I love you'
Written July 11th, 2005

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  • Gingetsuryuu
    August 14, 2005
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    I don't think I've ever seen a poem shorter than its title, with more meaning and emotion than a long poem. Very well done


  • openwindow
    August 14, 2005
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    i know exactly what you mean. kieren was workin the next station along from where the bombs went off n they wouldnt let him stop workin, i was so scared that another bomb went off. but he wernt aloud to leave the station.cya soon angel.

  • nomakfinder
    July 31, 2005
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    thank you for your comment and just know I like the French ppl too, this was actually based on a dream I had


  • Bride Of Hate
    July 19, 2005
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    Aww.....Did i forget to mention?? I LOVE YOU SMELLY!!! mwah!
    There, now that's out the way tee hee. Loved this one so cute and true.
    One love,
    Kitty xxx


  • sky black
    July 18, 2005
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    yeh these can just make everything bad disappear, and alone there are only 3 of them and they are very small, they make a whole lot of difference, its a shame alot of people dont actually mean what they say.....this is cute. and well pointed out! l8az sky xxxx


  • Jace Kindu
    July 13, 2005
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    Hey not a bad philosophy and sweet Jesus! I hope you weren't too rattled up by it. I heard about the bombings on the radio on my way to work and I almost went off the road. Damn those Al-Quida (if I spelled it wrong who gives a crap) to hell and let 'em get pinapples shoved up their ass. And make 'em pick 'em out themselves. But seriously, this is a nice inspiring piece and it comes straight from the heart, just like it's supposed to. Keep on pushing and let's kick some Al-Quida ass!

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