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crushin

well its been a long time since this
a simple crush
where i crave your kiss
its like we never went out
in the first place
and i hate to say i wasnt myself then
like i was today
i cant help but wish
you felt the same
after what we've been through
you'd think this was a game
but ive never been as happy
as when im with you
its been so long since ive felt like this
i dont know what to do
i know you probably dont
feel the same as i do for you
and you probably act like this with every girl
but when im with you
i feel like were the only ones in the world
what ever happened to
"hes an ass get over him"
i thought i was but
i cant help this state im in
so hopeless with my desires
that will always just be a dream
but im stuck in this castle
imprisoned by you the king
nothings fair in this game of love
i see your eyes twinkling
from the stars up above
i wanna know whats going through your mind
as we float int eh water with your hand in mine
i dont wanna be just another girl
dont want you to play games with my heart
i cant have it broken again
if its not even whole from the start
i love how you look around
and smile when you see me
i love how you accept me for who i am
even with my insecurities
i wanna know your deepest secrets
cause we may not have another day
i wanna know how you feel about me
cause i like you is that okay

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Written July 11th, 2005

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  • i heart halloween
    July 11, 2005
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    oh yes... i tell you what this feeling of love really sucks in this situation. you know why?? well, of course you do. but i mean like, you just love a guy so much when you know you really shouldn't because of what he's done to you or how he's treated you. then it especially sucks when he tries to get you back and you've still got that soft spot. great write.. i think you may like my last poem if you're atall interested I'd love to know what you think? great write!