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You And I

We've always laughed
And had a good time
You were there for me
And I for you

It seemed so perfect...

Until that horrid day
That our friendship was shattered
Into a million pieces
Like a broken mirror

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Written July 11th, 2005

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  • GothicLolitaGracie
    July 13, 2005
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    good job

    lol yeah I like this, it seems a little short, but thats only cuz I write super-long poems, lol! It reminds me of one of my poems, "Broken Mirror". : ) ttyl

  • Hope-87
    July 11, 2005
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    Are you saying that friendship can be replaced, or fixed, or something new could come out of it? Please explain what you said. I'm a little confused

  • telstar
    July 11, 2005
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    great work

    mirrors can be replaced.noy exactly the same but they do have a use.Not meaning friends can b replaced.Meaning something else comes into our lives when another leaves.Friends past n present will forever linger in happy memories.
    Edited on Jul 15, 3:44 p.m. because 'didnt mean to upset u'.