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Cradle me

Here I am again
spread out on the floor
drowning in my sorrow

I spend thousands of nights
on my knees crying
for you to come back home
and tell me that you love me
and that you'll never leave again

that you'll never leave again

cradle me
in your wings
I'm still so small and lost
and I need your protecting
cradle me
in your love
I need to hear it to keep my spirits up
I need to keep on walking knowing
cradle me
in your wings
I'm still so small and lost
and I need your eyes watching me

hold me
hold me
hold me
hold me

don't let
don't let
don't let
don't let go

cradle me
till the sun rises
till the sun sets
and the monn fades in
shining light
hold till then
then don't let go
don't let go
don't let go

whisper that you care
that you'll always be here
whisper that you care
that you'll always be here

no matter where I go
you will always be
when I need you
to cradle me

please come back home!
daddy don't you know how much I miss you so?
please come back home!
daddy don't you know how much I miss you so?

my life is not the same
when you're not here with me
and I don't see you everyday
smiling asking me how was my day

cradle me
in your wings
I'm still so small and lost
and I need your protecting
cradle me
in your love
I need to hear it to keep my spirits up
I need to keep on walking knowing
cradle me
in your wings
I'm still so small and lost
and I need your watching
cradle me
just a little longer daddy
just a little longer daddy
just a little longer daddy

when I speak I need for you to hear me
hold me when I cry
hold me I'm full with joy

Just a little longer daddy
just a little longer-
daddy


Author notes

I guess this song speaks really of the love i have for my dad
no i dont always agree with him, and yes, he makes me angry sometimes-but if he ever went awya and never came back my life would'nt be the same without him- I love my father very very much-so this song is for him-my letter expressing how i feel
Written July 11th, 2005

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  • Jillybean128
    June 24, 2006
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    Beautiful!! I love the message and how it is for your dad. I like the sadness...Nicely done!

  • CupidsMeth
    July 20, 2005
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    awww thanks Cas!


  • moonprincess
    July 20, 2005
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    This is very good! i liked how you wrote it. I liked every word and I liked how sad it was. Very Good! keep it up!
    Cassie


  • Open my eyes Angel
    July 19, 2005
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    Wow, this was really good poem/song
    I enjoyed every word... It's beautiful
    Very well written
    Keep it up!
    Good Luck to you
    God Bless

    Sedusha

  • CupidsMeth
    July 17, 2005
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    thanks for your comments! this place seems like the only place i can express myself freely and not feel ashamed or embarressed!


  • stolen fairy
    July 11, 2005
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    its very sweet. i love that you shared this song with us...
    ~tara


  • Lost-Pearls
    July 11, 2005
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    TRhe repetition of phrases makes ur poem very strong, in my opinion. I thought it was beautul, though very touching work. Keep writing, okayz?

  • CountryGurl756
    July 11, 2005
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    Breathe Takeing

    Its so sad. But its good


  • Je Suis Prete
    July 11, 2005
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    Very nice. Truely expresses your love for your dad. Beautifully written.

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