spread out on the floor
drowning in my sorrow
I spend thousands of nights
on my knees crying
for you to come back home
and tell me that you love me
and that you'll never leave again
that you'll never leave again
cradle me
in your wings
I'm still so small and lost
and I need your protecting
cradle me
in your love
I need to hear it to keep my spirits up
I need to keep on walking knowing
cradle me
in your wings
I'm still so small and lost
and I need your eyes watching me
hold me
hold me
hold me
hold me
don't let
don't let
don't let
don't let go
cradle me
till the sun rises
till the sun sets
and the monn fades in
shining light
hold till then
then don't let go
don't let go
don't let go
whisper that you care
that you'll always be here
whisper that you care
that you'll always be here
no matter where I go
you will always be
when I need you
to cradle me
please come back home!
daddy don't you know how much I miss you so?
please come back home!
daddy don't you know how much I miss you so?
my life is not the same
when you're not here with me
and I don't see you everyday
smiling asking me how was my day
cradle me
in your wings
I'm still so small and lost
and I need your protecting
cradle me
in your love
I need to hear it to keep my spirits up
I need to keep on walking knowing
cradle me
in your wings
I'm still so small and lost
and I need your watching
cradle me
just a little longer daddy
just a little longer daddy
just a little longer daddy
when I speak I need for you to hear me
hold me when I cry
hold me I'm full with joy
Just a little longer daddy
just a little longer-
daddy
Author notes
I guess this song speaks really of the love i have for my dad
no i dont always agree with him, and yes, he makes me angry sometimes-but if he ever went awya and never came back my life would'nt be the same without him- I love my father very very much-so this song is for him-my letter expressing how i feel
Written July 11th, 2005
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Comments
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Beautiful!! I love the message and how it is for your dad. I like the sadness...Nicely done!
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awww thanks Cas!
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This is very good! i liked how you wrote it. I liked every word and I liked how sad it was. Very Good! keep it up!
Cassie -
Wow, this was really good poem/song
I enjoyed every word... It's beautiful
Very well written
Keep it up!
Good Luck to you
God Bless
Sedusha
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thanks for your comments! this place seems like the only place i can express myself freely and not feel ashamed or embarressed!
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its very sweet. i love that you shared this song with us...
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TRhe repetition of phrases makes ur poem very strong, in my opinion. I thought it was beautul, though very touching work. Keep writing, okayz?
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Breathe Takeing
Its so sad. But its good -
Very nice. Truely expresses your love for your dad. Beautifully written.






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