I've shed too many tears,
in all these years.
For me to stay,
and possibly be ok.
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Written July 11th, 2005
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaw~
This one made me sad...
Hope whatever is happening gets better~
Wish you the best always...
You deserve it
Keep that chin up~
Thank you for sharing this one...
It's hard to write down emotions and you did a fine job~
Desire
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thanks i do my best and well i was talking to you
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good write hun, raw emotion in such few words, i love it
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short n gets straight 2 the point, good job
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what do you mean not on this planet?? I'm talking about when I go to my dads.. not suicide if that's what you are thinking...
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So uh were ya going cause if it aint on this planet that shut the hell up and talk to someone about it
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This is great.. Short and sweet.... and right to point... smiles... I like this. But I hope you are not thinking about doing something tho. smiles. hugsss good write
Andrea -
I love this...it's like something out of a song. Short and sweet, nice work
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short, sweet, and to the point. People write these long detailed poems, but I feel that some of the most powerful ones are of the simplest nature. good work!
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