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Breaking Love's Curse

I've been in and out of love so much that its hard to tell whether it is a gift or curse.
I still love those I used to love and I can't love those I never loved.
Love could be an eternal gist or an eternal curse.
Depends on which way you look at it.
It could've been a pain and hard to deal with.
Or could've been a pleaseure to have.
For me it was both... I've had loves of which were hard to live with and hard to live without.
I don't know if I'll ever break love's curse.
Every love I seem to have I always hurt one way or another.

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Boredom consumes me!!!
Written July 11th, 2005

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  • mesmerize me
    July 11, 2005
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    This is so f*ing true.....love sometimes is a curse and sometimes a pleasure...but all in all it mostly sucks.Anyway great poem and what not i wish for the best of stoofness for you and a good love experience.


  • imahappyhippychick
    July 11, 2005
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    great

    i feel ya on this one, i totally relate to it, its a great write, i like it alot its a really awesome poem your a great writer keep up the good work can't wait to hear more from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!