Someone tell me if this is all a dream
I beg you do not wake me if I sleep
Life is more bearable with my dragon helping me through
Voices always seem to interrupt us, no matter what we do
Earning another crack in the almost shattered looking glass
Running back to a dragon, just talking to him helps repair the past
Dancing alone under the moon
Revealing to the world my own beat and personal tune
At last my dragon comes to dance away the night
Gone again by the first sign of light
Once more I am alone, now dancing in my room
No one has touched me like my dragon, I’ll always save a dance for you
Author notes
Written July 10th, 2005
A contest entry
- Acrostics by Warrior7.
300 points, ended July 18, 2005, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Nice one girlie.. *tackles and hugs* I love you insanely much, and I miss you terribly.. I can't wait for Ren Fest, to get to see you again!! You mean the world to me, and I wouldn't be anywhere without you.. And I'm not a guy, so you CAN take my word for it! *snuggles* I liked this a lot too, by the way.. And thank you for everything, and I love you so much.. I'll talk to you later hunnabunch.. XChloroform-KissesX
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Congratulations! This is an amazing poem
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Congratulations on your Bronze Trophy.
angelica -
This is fantastic, i love the way you have set it out on the page and i also love that it rhymes, not many acrostics do. Very well written, thanks for entering and goodluck
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Wonderful
Copycat!
j/k. Wonderful Job 
. Acrostics (thanks iammlust, i didn' t know they were called that) are hard to do. Your rhyming was great throughout, and of course i loved the content.
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I haven't read much of your stuff lately but this was really well done. I love the structure and the word choice you used and it flowed well like the person above said. Great job and keep on writin!
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Oh wow, so many good points here. I like the acrostics, it's so hard sometimes to find the right word with the right letter. And I like the flow and rhyme of this, it's easy and not forced. I always like what the dragons stands for, like a secret lover that you want to share with all your friends but you realize it's better to leave to yourself. Super poem, excellent!
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