Come away with me to neverland
Where we値l never have to grow old
There痴 no one there to stop us
We値l never have to do what were told
Second star to the right,
And straight on till morn
Our little getaway place
Where there痴 no such thing as a storm
Where fairies and pirates
And magic exist
Come away with me
We値l find our own eternal bliss
We値l be together forever
Where no one can tell us no
Far away in never land
No one will find us when we go.
We値l run away
And be forever free
In never-never land
If you come away with me
Author notes
By Saddened Amber Eyes, Option 8
A contest entry
- emotion! by popsicle007.
310 points, ended February 6, 2006, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - But we flew to far away from Neverland... by Dawliah.
600 points, ended March 1, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I think there could be more to this. It's a bit over-played, the typical neverland. What it is, is well done, though. =]
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i love this! its sweet and love the way you want to escape to such a wonderful place! it is nicely written and i thought the 'directions' you gave her funny! great write well done, i know the background is cute but i strain to find what is has to do with neverland! lol, j/k
~Absinthe -
Once again you have managed to take my breath away with your beautiful imagery. I love this poem. I find myself captivated by your words. You are truly exquisitly talented. Great work.
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This was a really beautiful poem hun. I enjoyed it alot, but then again I like all of your poems! The flow of this was flawless! I wish there truely was a place like this, I wish there was an escape from the world we live in now. It will some stupid but Adam (my partner) is my neverland, when I am with him that's how I feel. Great poem hun! xxx Blonde Ambition ooo
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