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Heart




it beats - with joy
feels good - with happiness

hurts-by bad feelings .
one table of your love -blows me away

get sick -with junk food .
beats fast when I'm nervous.

beats slow- when I'm calm.
growls-when it hungry

it is shaped - like a box of good chocolate
there is nothing like having my sweetheart

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Written July 10th, 2005

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  • Psycho Dancer ---
    April 5, 2006
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    very good

    i am not sure what to write - this is a sweet poem - i like how it flows, hearts are so precious, especially when you are in love!

    take care

    xxx