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Optimism

It Pounds Harder with every
word.
And with the minutes of silence
softly growning cold.
My Heart.

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Written July 10th, 2005

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  • Dienush
    July 11, 2005
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    I like this, I think it expresses the idea of optimism pretty well. But it is not a haiku. Have you put it in this category only because it was short? Either way, this is interesting.


  • Yunalonei
    July 11, 2005
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    This is a nice poem, i agree not relly a haiku but still nice.

  • Berura Atara
    July 10, 2005
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    Hmm. I'm not sure I would call this (technically) a haiku, but if you tried shortening it a bit it could be. Nevertheless, it's a very good short poem, I can definitely relate...
    Edited on Jul 10, 7:03 p.m. because ''.