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Secretly Going Insane

I'm secretly going insane
Did i move to slow
I'm to blame
It's on the down low

I saw you with her
It brought me so much pain
Pain with no cure
I'm secretly going insane

Thoughts of you
Are constantly there
All the way through
Why do i care

The moment i saw you
I was so pleasantly pleased
But then she came for you
I fell to my knees

As i watched you kiss
I could see its very plain
I like you to much, i'm way to pissed
I'm secretly going insane

I laid in bed
Holding in my cry
You in my head
But why

So you can make me feel
I'm the one to blame
Push me down, make me kneel
I'm secretly going insane

Countless days
I want to see you
Seeing you in any way
But shes with you too

I cant stand this anymore
I'm in to much pain
You with this wh*re
Its making me go insane

Should i be more like her
To satisfy your need
To make me and you occur
Is that my only deed

I just need to declare
I'll do anything for you
Yes its a dare
But i need you cuz i'm secretly going insane

Author notes

this is kinda really dumb..but its my life..what can i say.
Written July 10th, 2005

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  • lilShorty22
    July 14, 2005
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    holy shit... this is awsome. really really good.. *props* lol.. long time no talk.. keep up tha good writin-- Shorty


  • XxAmeliaxX
    July 11, 2005
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    awesome

    This is really good. I know how his feels. So dont feel alone. I still love you. and that kicks ass woohoo. but yeah, great poem. Don't worry about him, your not to blame. trust me. Bye poo head.