The tap drips
An Ocean parted
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Written July 10th, 2005
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good poem very simple but i think it's good
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Wow, very original write. I love this, you said a lot in such view words. Brilliantly written, peaceful and heartfelt. Good job
~Lana
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Very intriguing. :-) Yes'm, indeed. Except... now, I really have to pee. ;-) Great job!
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I think you did a really nice job with this, but I do believe you may want to add one line, seeing as you are categorizing it as a Haiku and all.
But nonetheless, you really have spoken loads with just those two lines. Remarkable.
~ John
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this is a beautiful haiku... it leaves you thinking. there is so much said in so few words. i really love it!
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wow...not much to say on this that would give it much justice.
beautiful to say the very least
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Wow. You are the reason I'm slowly learning to love haikus, because they're short, but they can say so much. I loved this one...going to check out more of your work later.
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I love the message in this, keep on writing.
Blessed be,
Lefay -
LOVE it, love it, love it. You are a writer after my own heart! Love your scree name, I wonder why that is
I love the simply simple.
~Dee
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