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Gathering the Hay

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Wafts of warm scented air
invade the senses with mowed
hay and honeysuckle;
Prickles of aroma drifting
in and out, as wave upon wave
tickles memories of making
hay in years gone by;

With bottles of cold tea and lemonade,
Boxty and corn cakes , honey
buns and buttered bread still
fragrant from fresh baking;

The indeterminable mosquito,
playing havoc and hide and seek
with the fleshy parts exposed;
Fields of forked hay mounded
awaiting the giants to descend and
gather and the slow trudge back
to the barns to stack..

Hundreds of bails, into imitation
houses stretching skywards until
with muscles aching and fatigue
overwhelming we go home;

Laughter mingles with exhaustion
and at the table awaits a feast for
the triumphant warriors; From oldest
to youngest seated at the table, a profound
silence is filled with the words
"For what we are about to receive"

And with the tired words uttered, we remain
in silence till the last scrap has been eaten
or the youngest hay maker falls
fast asleep.......




Author notes

"Boxty" is a flat pancake made from raw and cooked potatoes.
Written July 10th, 2005

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  • cutiepie gold member
    July 12, 2005
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    Thank you for the lovely words Steven, as always I do appreciate then


  • StevenHoward
    July 11, 2005
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    You got my attention right away with the title. I spent the summers of my teenage years working hay fields. It was hot, hard work, but I was rewarded with a sturdy body, and more money than those boys my age who worked in department stores

    I remember the smells (the hay, not the workers ), how thirsty we were, the look of the fields waiting for us to pick up the loads, the hot days, and how tired we were when we came back from the field at night. You have captured all of it beautifully. Good job my friend.


  • Dissodatore Cuore
    July 10, 2005
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    Hugs right back at you! They're moving their farm, to something bigger in Kentucky. Maybe i'll have a better chance of riding the tractor in that one...


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 10, 2005
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    Thank you Dee..Glad you enjoyed it and sorry about the hunger


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 10, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind comments


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 10, 2005
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    Thank you I am delighted that it brought back sweet memories of your Grandmothers Farm..


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 10, 2005
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    Glad you enjoyed this trip down memory lane Many thanks for your kindness

  • cutiepie gold member
    July 10, 2005
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    Lol, well my Granny had feather matresses which had to be shaken each day Riding on top of the hay Rick had to be earned..and how we would laugh bobbing across the field pitched high amongst the straw, but the real treat was being allowed to drive the tractor..ah sweet memories


  • Man of Harlech silver member
    July 10, 2005
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    First rate job

    Well, this took me back at least 60 years. I felt itchy and sratchy and sneezy. Thanks for all of that. Our family still used fresh hay in mattress covers for the guest beds. And, yes, there were hay rides. Those who remember can appreciate the excellent images in this poem, and so well presented.


  • LemonDropAngel
    July 10, 2005
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    great job this is my favorite part
    "Laughter mingles with exhaustion
    and at the table awaits a feast for
    the triumphant warriors; From oldest
    to youngest seated at the table, a profound
    silence is filled with the words
    "For what we are about to receive""

  • Dissodatore Cuore
    July 10, 2005
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    I love this poem! It reminds me of my grandma's farm. Of course, thats kinda funny because her farm is nothing like the one in the farm but to a city girl like me, its all the same. Either way, I love this poem. Its so sweet.

    -Naiva

  • Half Imp
    July 10, 2005
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    Great JOb! I loved it, it'sgreat! thank you sooooooo much for sharing this great piece of work!

    -Fishy


  • SimpleSarcasm
    July 10, 2005
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    Of course you do know you made me hungry! I like this piece. Wonderful imagery and a nice flow.

    ~Dee


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 10, 2005
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    Your recipe is not so different from ours but I have sent you the irish version...Enjoy

  • wordlover silver member
    July 10, 2005
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    This is a hay producing area in US and one of the summer jobs is "haulin' hay." I thought we produced a lot of hay until I went through a section of Colorado a few years ago and saw the green bales of alfalfa stacked building high right out in the open. Wish you would im me and tell me how to make boxty. My mother always made potato patties with potatoes (cooked), egg flour and a bit of milk if needed. At least something like that. Really could get right in the middle of your hayfield, though. Great poem, a real literary adventure. Stu

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