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Cat Nap

It was dark with ghosty images floating through the shadows.
                       The dark shapes in the the trees look like black widows.
I quickly hurried to the center of the woods where there is some bright sun rays.
                       The light kills the darkness with a huge golden blaze.
Upon entering the center, it was a clear blue lite sky with a sun.
                       I gaze awhile longer at the sky and hear a load gun.
The shoot went off about 35 feet around from where I was standing.
                       I quickly to leave and about 25 feet up, I hear a furious howling.
Now I'm close enough to see the commotion I heard some feet back.
                       It was a pack of wolves surrounding a man in black.
My mind went blank with only one thought keep repeating.
                       I looked at the man and wolves and started SHOUTING!!
I quickly caught snap and I did as my mind played in my head.
                       !Damn! theirs coming for me instead.
I ran in a north/west direction and was startled to see pretty fluffy white snow.
                       Then, I remembered the wolves that were right behind... Where did they go?
I look behind to see that I'm surrounded by a snow storm.
                       But, this was no ordinary weather it was, well... warm?
As I took one last look at all the blinding white flakes.
                       A Hand reaches for me and grabs hold of me like a wooden stake.
I freak out by jerking around while in this mighty grip.
                       Then, I see that it's my brother waking me from are long trip.
Man, that was one hell of a weird dream for me to have seen.
                       I shake it off and light up some of my killer green.

Author notes

Tripping and writting what I felt.
Written July 9th, 2005

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