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Before I Go

The day I have to say my goodbye
I'll fall to my knees and start to cry
You'll pull me up and hold me near
You say its okay, but then why do I fear
I don't want to lose you, not now, or ever
Please tell me you love me and lets be together
Don't you see we were meant to be
but first I need to know if you can ever love me
So as I tell you here and now how I feel
Is there anything between us that could be real
So please give me an answer before I go
You need to tell me and let me know
He pulls me close and whispers in my ear
For you are mine, no need to fear
I love you with all my heart and soul
You complete my world, you make me whole
So, to answer your question and let you know
You can't leave me, I can't let you go
So please don't walk out of my life and leave me as one
Cause I Love You so much, your my obsession

Author notes

I wrote this when I was 15 or 16 I think. We were moving and I had to leave all my friends and most of all my crush. I wanted to tell him how I felt before I left in hopes he'd feel the same but I was scared.
Written July 10th, 2005

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  • Redflower562003
    September 16, 2005
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    So as I tell you here and now how I feel
    Is there anything between us that could be real


    So as I tell you here and now how I feel
    Is there anything between us that could be real

    Might want to work on those two lines but for a 15-16 year old pretty good very good rhyming again