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Dance Like This

Feet on the ground
I feel light as air
I spin and I hold hands
I cry as I sway
And I dance like this
I move like this
We sing along
And in this we are one
We need nothing more
Than each other to share
The inner light of us all
That leaves and enters
That flows to and through
My hands rise to the sky
I dance for hours and never tire
From head to toe I sweat
I tingle with energy and love
The very air I breathe is vibrating
I am no longer me
I’m not a student, a sister
I am light, energy, awareness
I am joy, completely and utterly
I am nameless
Shapeless
I have no boundaries,
And my light shines for all to see

Author notes

I have had the extreme honor and privelege to be in the presence of a musician LeRoy White several times. his music is nothing less than transcendent, especially when you're in a group of your closest friends in a small room dancing like it's the last thing you'll ever do.
Written July 10th, 2005

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    July 10, 2005
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    Ah, such spirituality shining through this piece. It is so much like the astral dance of spirits, flowing in the light of lights, cultivating serenity and love through the ethers and the worlds. Quite enchanting and very well written. A true gem of a piece and very intimate in feel. Spectacular job here! Blessings, Gypsy

  • romantic-soul
    July 10, 2005
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    This is a very impressive and unique piece. I think the flow and imagery are awesome and it has a subtle strength that lures the reader into the essence of spirituality. Outstanding job! Best wishes, Lisa


  • Immortal Flesh
    July 10, 2005
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    This is by far my favorite in the bunch. This is what the very essence of the spirit energy is.
    Beautifully written, beautifully expressed.
    I can almost see the invisible energy dancing in me.
    Great job!!!!
    Good luck!!!