I love you Lord.
You alone are the song I sing.
I love you Lord.
For you, my eyes look heavenward.
I offer you everything.
My heart, mind, soul to you I bring.
I love you Lord.
Author notes
Option 7 - a very short poem about 1 strong emotion - my love for Jesus Christ.
Yes, I did read the bunny rules.
This is the first time I have attempted a rondelet.
fyi....It is a 7 lined poem consisting of only 2 rhymes and line 1 is repeated in line 3 and 7. The rhyme scheme is AbAabbA. The syllable count is 4848884.
Written July 9th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Random Poems For Me To Read!!! : D by OutsideTheMirror.
400 points, ended July 21, 2005, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice job. I liked this. Although I'm not a religious person, I can still appreciate it when someone writes with emotion. I also liked this form. I've never tried that one before.
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it does sound like a psalm! as you probably know from other comments on your writes, i'm not a religious poem kind of kid, but i always enjoy yours because they show more emotion than anything else. wonderful write!
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Beautifuly written almost sounds like you are singing it and the notes are flowing from your heart a melody within. Very nicely done you sang on key and tune and I enjoyed it.
Sherry~ Ps think you do go on broadway singing hehe
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I love reading poems by you, you are a very faithful Christian and your poems are full of love for God. Theres no better way to write than to write for the Lord. Loved your poem and keep writting!
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This sounds almost like a psalm! It rings out with passion and love. Nicely written, a sincere song for the Lord. Great job!
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I love this poem, for your sincere love of God. it's great to see other Christians out there just as passionate as their Savior as I am. On fire for Jesus! Love Helen x
Edited on Jul 10, 10:04 because ''.
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