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Forever, Together.

Show me my wildest fantasy,
Smile and make me happy.
Times can be rough, but stay with me.
I promise to keep your heart filled with glee.

I feel safe in your arms,
No longer the constant fear of harm.
Your kiss tells me a story of love,
Something majestic, romantic, sent from above.

This feeling is hard to explain,
Please darling don't get mad when I complain.
We can get through it, if you believe in us,
Sorry babe when I freak out or fuss.

I want, need, and love your embrace,
Precious fingertips running across your face.
Stay close to me,
We shall forget the troubles and be free.
I promise to love you forever,
Just say you'll be with me forever, together.

Author notes

Wrote this in a few minutes, thinking about a certain someone I <3 {Heart}.
<3..Sorry if its bad..x.x
Written July 9th, 2005

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  • Poetic Geisha
    July 9, 2005
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    good poem

    It's not bad. Fantasy can always be had in some venue or other; just make sure it's in the right place. The rhyme scheme is good and it flows well. All the best.
    Edited on Apr 19 because ''.