Like no other, you stand by me,
like a key master to my heart, you
hold the key,
forever and ever,
we'll be together.
Like no other, you give me your
undivided attention,
and in return,
i give you my UN shaken affection.
Like no other, you have loved me.
like no other, you set me free,
and for once i feel like i can breath,
now i can wake up and smell the sweet
smell of the roses you gave me.
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Written July 9th, 2005
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awww this is really cute, a little short as they way you ended it sounded like you wanted more. nice write otherwise, sorry i havent been around been on holi
anyway, hope you're ok, l8az love ya sky xxxx
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awesome
wow juana this is a great write i love it ....its really nice and well thought out ..who ar we talking about though ??? lmao just kidding i know who but anywayz great write i really like it!!!take care my friend love ya lots cat -
Tnx for your comment on my poem 'Childhood Memories'.
This is a great poem. I love it, and the emotion you put in it. Reach for the stars and never stop writting.
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great job juana keep ritin
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EXCELLENT
This is good. It made me smile.
I'm proud of you; you've done well with this.
Thanks for letting me know.
Love Brian -
wow gurl! even better...MUCH! better!!! great write
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hey
hey chanelle, how are you? well good i hope, but anyway i finally think i may have finished this poem, let me knoe wat u think
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hey
hey brian, i finally think i may have finished this poem , although i know i still can make it better, check it out and let me know wat you think
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wow this is awesome!!cant wait to se the finished !!
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GOOD START
Not a bad start. This is pretty good.
I can't wait to see the rest of it.
Take care and God bless.
Love Brian
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