With no sister to your name
Life must be quite a tiring game
Ask me, I know that difference
'Cos I had once prayed in deep reverence
For someone for me
And then my life was full of glee
Suddenly, halved is the pain
There's someone to share your disdain
With the way world does remain
There's some to tell, patiently explain
That God couldn't be everywhere
Abandon us he couldn't, 'cos he does care
When our guardian angel prayed for us on his knees
God made one of his best piece
Sisters he created from angels' soft wishes
And wove them with fairies whispers and promises
With a heart to unconditionally love
Mending spirits with the power from above
You are estranged from the angel made for you
I am saddened... bitter things are always true
I want to be there always
Keep you under my loving gaze
I wish that you would unite once more
With your angel and be filled with happiness galore
I will not make false promises
Or lead you astray with untrue pretences
I would love to be you sister dear
I would share your pain and fear
Pray for you... I surely will today
I'll ask God to take your pain away...
Author notes
Hie
I would love to be ur big sis... We can mail each other. Send IMs. Or anything you want... I am working. So I kinda have less time. But I am a person who can love.
I will pray for you today dear. God bless you always. Hope you make it up with your mom.
C u...
Written July 9th, 2005
A contest entry
- I need a Mummy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and a big sister as well!!!!!! by My unshed tears.
400 points, ended July 27, 2005, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
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I really liked this a lot. You must be so nice because you read my poems and wanted to be my big sister too and now you are in my mind . You have a pretty name also. Mine is Madison , but I am not allowed to tell every body. I asked cherche -d -ame when you said that and she looked at your page and she said it was okay. She is my real family and writes really good on here , just like you . She likes a lot of things about India and Tibet and all those places. She now lives here in America , but she is from a little country in Europe( Luxembourg)
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Ofcourse! I want to be ur big sis!
Delighted to be given the honour
So u tell me what I have taken on!!! Cos u hav said ' you have no idea what you have taken on'
N' God bless ya!
Love
Sis
Edited on Jul 27, 9:31 p.m. because ''. -
Hey I hope that you still want to be my big sis... cos the role is yours, you have no idea what you have taken on
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very great work
hi, thogh delayed,delighted i'm
the work speaks your true mind
any one wishes to have you for asister
go on reaching out to people
morrow's world is yours sure -
keep going!
great poem! -
bravo
Bravo I love this poem very touching and very wonderful -
beautiful
lovely write.touching and drawing.goodluck to u. -
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