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gave him up!!!what should i do

i gave you up in a blink,
you were always there for me,
you never left,
and now you will never come back.

we were to gather,
but i love my best friend,
i gave you to her,
and that is how it ends.

or is it,
it hurts to see you with her,
but i know i did the right thing,
now she is happy,
but what about me.

i love him so much,
i don't want him to hurt,
but yet i love her so much,
and i don't want her hurt.

i love you both what should i do?????????????????????

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i love the both sooooooooooooo much, and i gave him up to make her happy,but i want him back because now im without, but i dont want to hurt her.

WHAT SHOULD I DO?
Written July 9th, 2005

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  • Zyi
    October 12, 2005
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    I dont know this whole situation or anything,
    but whatever you did, it seems it was quite nice.
    I mean it must hurt for you dont have the one you need,
    but you did it to benefit another. Great job with the
    emotions
    Muchlove

    Donna

  • HopelessDreamer2010
    July 12, 2005
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    kristin omg gurl! that was really great of you to give up the person you love...omg i cant believe u have him to her well that was ur choice..well ttyl muah----lacey


  • parinoid-junkie
    July 12, 2005
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    aww! its about cody y'd u give him to megan while she was with loritson?!?!?! stupid ass!

  • secretlover
    July 9, 2005
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    Hey! Well, of course i know what this is about! And kristen you don't know how much i thank you for this. I will always love you


  • sassynred
    July 9, 2005
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    oh my god that was so good and sad i dont know what u should do. sorry wish i could have helped

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