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Tears Fall from London's Eyes

Thursday; July 07, 2005
Tears fall from London's eye's

God’s words; heard again,
A warning; a sign,
As we pray; because of another days terror,
Innocent lives; were taken again,
Four years later, it happens again,
Clearly this war is not over; or has even began,
Tears fall from London’s eyes; as shock spreads the world,
Devil strikes again; Angles were called,
Taken they were; because of hateful terror in Satan's eyes.

Author notes

Short - but sense the tragedy of Londons attack, I figured I would write a bit of something, because for one, we all need support and prayer, and besides four years ago this happened to americans; I just hope no other countries expeirance what we have. Its terrible for someone to kill innocent people.

If only everyone in a different race, married someone of another race, maybe there wouldn't be so much hate
Written July 9th, 2005

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  • barefoot contessa silver member
    July 29, 2005
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    What a lovely tribute, young one! It was a sad day indeed. I hate terrorism. shakes her head Anyways, this actually made me cried. Reading this...don't tell anybody. lol


  • little-hug
    July 11, 2005
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    I wish this wasn't true and that it hadn't happened to London but it did and it is another wake up call. We need to try harder for peace to exist.
    Your poem is short but powerful and very effective. The title is painfully beautiful.

    Ellie