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Alone

Sitting here
I feel alone
No one around
to hear my cry,
for help
All I need
Is someone to talk to
Is that too much to ask???
People are too consumed
in there own lives
to notice anyone else
I would drop
everything
At the first tear
of a friend

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Written July 9th, 2005

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