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Our Bond

From the Night we came, into the Night we go.
Blessed to walk the Moonlight together alone.
Sometimes Another chooses to walk our path.
Sometimes 2 become 1, to live in the Night Eternal.

Tonight,Insert Mans name here and Insert Womans name here, stand
before the Gods and Goddesses, to lay such a claim.

We come to Witness this Ultimate Joining,
The Blood Bond.

Come forward, Lovers of The Blood.
Stand now as ye will stand Forever...

Heart to Heart.
Look into each others eyes and see the Soul that will soon be Joined to yours.


Into this Chalice will flow the Heart's Blood of these 2 lovers.
As so it mixes, so too will your Souls mix, never to be
broken, never to be seperate, never to be Alone.

wrap crimson band around wound>


Drink of this blood and repeat these words:
I will stand by your side, and fly within your Soul.
I will stand between you and all which would harm you, even to
sheild you with My body from all that will harm you.
I will never betray you, for you are My Heart, My Soul and My Lyfe, My everything..


Drink of this blood and repeat these words:
I will stand by your side, and fly within your Soul.
I will stand between you and all which would harm you, even to
sheild you with My body from all that will harm you.
I will never betray you, for you are My Heart, My Soul and My Lyfe, My everything.


I present to The Blood of Mans name and Womans name
Forever Bound, Eternally Free!


Above you are the stars, below you are the stones.
As tyme passes, remember...Lyke the star should
your love burn brightly, lyke the stone should your
love be firm. Be close, yet not so close that you
restrict one another.

Possess one another, yet grant each other the
freedom to grow. Be understanding and compassionate, and have
patience with each other, for storms may come, but they will quickly
pass.

Be free in giving affection and warmth. Fear not lest the ways or
words of the unenlightened give you unease.
For the Lady and Lord are with you, now and always.
As both your arms and the cord form the
symbol of eternity, may your love be strong and purrfect through this lyfe ... and all others.

As the Gods and Goddesses are witness
with those of us present now, I proclaim them
Husband and Wife...and thus are they Bonded in Blood
The two are now one.

BLESS IT BE..

© by Preston Leitzel  8 May 2005

Author notes

I can not delete this cause this is one of My best write ever.. So I just took out My and My exs name.. ..
Written July 9th, 2005

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  • Syc
    July 10, 2005
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    WOW thank you for the comment .. and your wishes for US. Her and I will do the bond on new castle beach when we go to Australia, in late oktober or early november. be well and take care. and once again thank you.


  • Playful Angel
    July 10, 2005
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    ohh wow!! this is great!! this is beyond words. i really hope your plans work out for you, seems you two are soul mates. all the best. and take care!

  • Syc
    July 10, 2005
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    WEll the blood, is something we both enjoy, We are not vampires or wotever. Its a way to bond our souls.. instead of useing a ring and a piece of paper.. her and I both share the same thought on marrige and such and want something far deeper. and this is how we may do so.. so ya dont havbe to get Van after Me lol..

  • Syc
    July 10, 2005
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    It not a poem tho it just something I wrote for My love and I to do other then getting married..
    Edited on Jul 10, 3:51 because ''.

  • Tastes Like Murder
    July 10, 2005
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    Wow, this was a very powerful piece. It seems very dark and it has a very strong message to it. Very passionate and filled with depth and beauty.

    Molly

  • MightyReciter
    July 10, 2005
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    I love the background it accentuates the poems real meaning. This poem also has a hint of a great poet in it, in my opinion. Keep writing this amazing poetry. I enjoyed reading this. It was extremely deep!!!!!!!!!!!

  • MightyReciter
    July 10, 2005
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    I love the background it accentuates the poems real meaning. This poem also has a hint of a great poet in it, in my opinion. Keep writing this great poetry. I enjoyed reading this. It was very deep!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    July 9, 2005
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    I am sorry I cannot continue to read this. I just don't hold to the views expressed by this poem. Sorry.

    God Bless
    Tammy


  • Dances With Trees
    July 9, 2005
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    AWWWWWWW!!! This was very passionate!! I can tell you thought this through and though it isn't really a widely practiced ritual...I can tell it suites you very well!! (I didn't mean that in a bad way though!!) It seems really romantic! I am happy that you and the love of your life have found your own way of expressing yourself without having to conform to the rules of society!! This poem was very well thought out and very creative!! Two thumbs up!! Great job!!


  • Chad Lough
    July 9, 2005
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    Was thge drinking blood thing a metaphor for joining as one flesh? If so, it is ingenious. If not, then this poem is creepy, and I will get Van Helsing on you tail...

    I want to be one with my love, too.
    I want to marry her, but time will bring all things meant, correct?
    Very nice...

    Sincerely,
    Chad


  • ricochet rabbit
    July 9, 2005
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    What I like: you describe the setting perfectly, and you have a very compelling story to tell.

    What I didn't like: I thought the tone of your poem was a little to emotional. I don't think it gives me room to have my own feelings.

  • Veil of Winter
    July 9, 2005
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    This was an excellent write. The beginning kind of confused me at first, but that's probably due to my own lack of intelligence. Nice job, wonderful flow. Cheers


  • Your Hine Us
    July 9, 2005
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    This is a good poem of love,but ouch I dont like blood,I like the paper way of bonding myself.but if it makes you happy them more power to ya.dark and unique a good read.


  • greyhaime silver member
    July 9, 2005
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    haunting, beautiful

    This is a beautiful and very powerful bonding. very nicely wrote.deep and touching.blessings to you and yours for the occasion.

  • Lotus Flower
    July 9, 2005
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    How lovely the bond of love this is dark and beautiful!! Great read I really enjoyed this piece.

  • Syc
    July 9, 2005
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    well My girl and I are going to be doing this.. We didnt wanna get married cause marrige isnt as deep as we want it to be.. THis is bonding of the hearts, soul, and blood. making the love forever and not just till death do us part.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 9, 2005
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    A deeper dive

    This bond is peculiar and seems to be purely an imagainaative thought under this category.How you thought it ? it is really amazing and worth thinking through and through. The flow of the write is also very slick and to the point bring the issue on the surface. this work shows the uniqueness of admirations..prabhudayal khattar


  • Teresa UK
    July 9, 2005
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    Evocative, beautiful

    Wonderful, magical ceremony. Love entwined within each phrase. Evokes times past where life was simple and carefree, when people lived in an inherent harmony with nature. Perhaps only in dreams, but we can choose the life we live, and this is evidence for that. Thank you!

  • Syc
    July 9, 2005
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    I am glad you lyke it Chibbs .. Yeah her and I both want this. we dont wanna be married. cause you dont need a ring and a piece of paper to prove your love..


  • ChibberMonkey
    July 9, 2005
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    AWWWWW! Preston! This is absolutely amazing..its deep, affectionate, passionate... And just simply beautiful. Your binding with her seems to be the perfect thing. Im happy for you.
    ~Ashley~

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