Weary, dreary
Full of fear
Whidled this flute
So sour a tune
A tune long lost
Unwanted sounds of heaven
Reaching this hell
Quenche the unholy fire
So put the gun to your head
Smile as you pull the trigger
For you are free at last
Miss me not, save your tears
Do not morn a soul set free
Listen to the sounds of heaven
Author notes
HOW THE HELL DO U SPELL WHIDLED...whiddled, widdled, ARG!!!! Ok, the poem...it was kinda late, I was tired, kinda mad, my allergies were bein a bitch, but this is what came out. Hope u enjoy
Written July 8th, 2005
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heya, this poem is so terible sad,
its good, acaully it is a great poem, but its sad..
love my darling and Merry Christmas
angie
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awwwwwwww how sad.....You know what really got me was the line ,"smile as you pull the trigger." I kinda got this image in my mind and it came out kinda creepy. I mean I always got the image of someone trembling and with a tear stained face as they committed suicide. I mean it's good! But sad and I hope you didnt write this from your own feelings...Anyways keep up the good work!
Edited on Aug 05, 9:56 p.m. because ''. -
i think this was a really nice write i hope this does not relate to you or any one you know well i really liked it great write
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good
OoH dark..but then very interesting. I loved it. Good words webt well with this piece. Keep it up
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LOVE IT!
this is amazing Em!
great job as always!
Alyssa
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i loved this poem... you can take this it apply it to other things... you have your meaning for this... and the others that read... can form it to their own.. it's a great write.. keep it up
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im luvin it!
hey cutie! i love this. its pimp. JUST LIKE YOU! lol i almost had to kill my scanner.... it was being a whore.. but its fixed and now i love it. i gave it lovins. and here im giving u lovins too!
awwwwwwww! good write sweetie!!!
<3 from the Pimped out Mudda,
maggie
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