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Falling For You

I watched the fire reflect in your eyes...
As I sat beside you feeling nothing but a comforting sensation that is unexplainable.
I almost gave you up once and I am glad I didn't...
I used to hope that I would never let myself go through the pain of falling in love...
But now I don't really care much for that thought...

I've found too many reasons not to care anymore...
You're sweet...
You're so cute when your mad...
You care...
You put others before yourself...
I'm more comfortable around you, then anyone else I've dated...
I'm not scared or embarrassed to be myself around you...
And I'm starting to fall for you...

I watched the sparkles flash in your eyes...
As I did the words "love" ran through my head repeatedly...
I got so scared and wondered if I was making a huge mistake again...
But then all I had to do was look into your eyes and realize that you aren't the same as every other guy...
And I'm starting to fall for you...

I don't know how to tell you...
I wish I did...
I wish I could...
But I don't know how...
I'm falling for you...
Hoping you're there to catch me...

Author notes

If you know me... then you know who this is to.
Written July 8th, 2005

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  • Lost-N-Found
    July 9, 2005
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    Thank you Ashley for caring.... If you read the other message on here from Mason, you notice many people are getting pissed over nothing.. I hope everything works out for you and your old flame... I really think you deserve it... Good luck and Best wishes.
    Love ya,
    Manna


  • July 9, 2005
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    oh do me a favor and shut the fuck up plz. none of the loc wants shit to do with you get the fuuk off of us. and if it aint about any of us ... fuck off any


  • mesmerize me
    July 9, 2005
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    I am happy for you samantha,i hope you and...James? Have a good relationship.This is a really sweet poem,and i know how this is....i think i'm starting to fall for an old flame again,not Jesy,god no.But i am very happy for you.Good luck and stuff.
    -Ashley


  • Forgotten Warrior
    July 8, 2005
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    Well sammy this is a real good poem i like i t i hope things workout and dont be scared 2 fall in love ok and u want hurt james idk think u will anyways much love sammy


  • WrapMeUpTight
    July 8, 2005
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    i feel this exact same way now...im so scared to fall in love yet....when i look in his eyes everything seems different....he puts his arms around me and everything seems right....you dont want to get hurt.....yet you are almost certain you wont this time....i did fall in love with him.....the thing was that he told me he loved me first! Great poem.....i so got chills from this! Amazing!

    Always
    Sexxi gemini

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