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Julia

Julia

you make me feel so beautiful

who knows

how you manage to do these things

its like you have the whole universe in your hands

we eat out of the same bowl

share the same cup.

and my world keeps turning...my world keeps turning..my world keeps turning

because of you.


julia....julia.....julia
my angel...my angel...
my friend.

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Written July 8th, 2005

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  • Camille705
    September 8, 2006
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    WOOHOO !!

    oh i love this poem, it's simple but you concieve many feelings from it

  • VentulusFamosus
    December 21, 2005
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    This is absolutely beautiful. The poem flowed very nicely, and your word choice really brought out the fine tones in the poem. The love seemed to simply float off of the screen. Wonderful, beautiful write!


  • Word-Painter
    July 19, 2005
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    THANK YOU!

    Thank you sooo much! I love yew uncle! you're the best and my summer is going great! I went to some water parks and I went to one of my favorite bands concert and I met one of the band members! i'm having a blast but everything is starting to mellow down beacause school is about to start again. see ya around!

    -vanessa


  • UncleSpace
    July 16, 2005
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    Yey Vanessa!

    Hi! This is beautiful, and I bet she loves it. It's great you did it on the guitar too! Rockon little dudess I hope all is well with you my friend, have a great summer. Hang in there!

    Unc