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euphoric tears

Soft hands grasp her own
Gentle fingertips on her skin
And when electric emotions fly up her spine
She doesn't know where to begin

Its been much too long a time
Its been ages since they've shared a kiss
And if only one thing is worth living for
She knows in her heart it is this

Laughter and small talk ensure
They aimlessly wander the place
There is no other reason for being there
If only to see his face

The sky opens up as if on cue
The clouds roll in with rain
Hand in hand they break away from life
Its always different and always the same

In an abandoned bus stop
Its their time to view the world
They talk of life and infinity
His hair a mess and hers curled

They hold each other in silence
They explore each other's eyes
They share kisses filled with romance
And she tries not to cry

There are confessions of love
And like all the times before
She just hopes to be around
So she can hear it just once more

She is euphoric beyond articulation
Yet she awaits a sinking heart
And the feeling of in completion
Whenever they have to part

They whisper promises in the unkempt booth
Passion flies when their lips touch
She doesn't feel tears because shes unhappy
She just loves him that much

Author notes

what can I say, really? Its that feeling, thats all I'm trying to show.
Written July 8th, 2005

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  • illcryforyou
    July 9, 2005
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    Wow, Amazing as always... and hey. your poems are all about him, recently.... so = P

  • run hippie run
    July 9, 2005
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    wow Kaela this is a.m.a.z.i.n.g.!