hes so great, and so fine
but so out of reach, he cant be mine
he walks by, sometimes shoots me a smile
always makes me happier for a while
then weeks and weeks and weeks go by
when for the first time he says hi
I think about him day and night
i wonder if hes mr right
I turn around, see hes walking over, what do i say, oh god what do I do
i wanna yell rite out
i love you
he looks at me with an alkward smile
says ive liked u for quiet a while
he asks me out, I say ok
now i wish hed go away
i wish i hadent said ok
hes driving me crazy everyday
always there
playing with my hair
why is life so unfair
a week ago this was my dream
now all i wanna do is scream
so i say get lost please go away
i finally figured out wat to say
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Written July 8th, 2005
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Wow this situation sucks. Never been in it, but I can imagine. I liked the rhyming in this and I liked how ytou made each stanza short until the end where you concluded it.
Great write, and keep up the great work!
-Principessa -
i've been through this. i never thought i'd have a chance with the perfect guy, but he asked me out, so of course i was thrilled. but they always come back, don't they?? they can get annoying, but at least they're there when you need 'em most.
Best of Luck
♥Lindsay
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